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State of the Author, February 2024 edition

Posted in Elantra, Essalieyan, writing, Shane Rebenschied, Kathleen Oudit.

January was the month of reviewing copy-edits for Cast in Atone­ment, while writing the Sagara book that is not yet titled — Magic School 2. Copy-edits are gone, and until page proofs arrive, only writing remains.

The West novel in progress is The Wild Road. I have broken 100k words, and I am hoping that the book will be 250k words long. Or less. To be fair, I was also hoping Hunter’s Redoubt would be 250k words long. Which it wasn’t.

The only West novel that has stayed on the right side of 200k words was City of Night. Which came in at 176k words. I honestly do not write long books on purpose, but… I write them to reach the end. Some­times the end is farther away than I thought.

I think I mentioned that I have sold two more Sagara novels to Mira. Magic School 2 is the first book in that contract; Cast 19 would be the second. In theory. But there’s a possi­bility that I’ll have another Severn story.

The reason there have been only two Severn novels is: I had two Severn stories I wanted to tell. Novels set in the past are their own special chal­lenge. While I remember the events of my novels, I don’t remember them in gran­ular detail unless I read the whole book over again. And there are a lot of books T_T.

But for those of you who’ve read Shards of Glass, there’s one char­acter intro­duced in that book that would fit in very well in the “past”, and is inter­esting enough that a story involving the Wolves and the warrens would absolutely work.

In the mean­time, the unplanned events of Shards of Glass have made the writing of book two inter­esting. Things I did not expect to show up on the page did show up on the page. Which means that what I thought would happen happened in the wrong order, and infor­ma­tion I thought would be revealed later, if at all, of course appeared on the page. Conse­quences of that are ongoing.

like having conse­quences in my books. I like the fact that previous actions affect future actions. I do. But some­times my writer-brain and my type‑A brain clash like a storm.

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Other than that, some hard­ware failure caused huge amounts of stress (it’s as fixed as it’s going to be now), and yesterday, the wire drying rack we’ve used for almost 30 years finally collapsed into a flat heap, never to rise again. So yesterday was researching wire drying racks on the internet, and then finally buying one, which is entirely unlike actual writing.

Also: we have a minor plumbing failure that is set to become a major plumbing failure without inter­ven­tion, so we will now have plumbers in our base­ment this coming Thursday for an entire day (hope­fully only one), and a … plumbing bill that involves internal sump-pumps (as in adding one).

And now I will get ready to go to work at the book­store. I will close with the front cover of Cast in Atone­ment; I haven’t yet received the full cover, with back text, which is what I gener­ally post. As usual, I have the best team: Kath­leen Oudit is art director; Shane Reben­schied, art.

Cast in Atonement front cover

35 Responses to State of the Author, February 2024 edition

  1. Kassandra A. says:

    I may have let out a tiny squeal about another possible Severn book. <3

  2. DorisE says:

    Wolves and Warrens, yes, please!

  3. Elissa Carroll says:

    Nice to hear from you Michelle! I really enjoyed Shards of Glass. It was excep­tional even among your already wonderful works :) I can imagine it being stressful to end up with such long books but as your reader, I do enjoy and appre­ciate that they take us to the end of what you wished to tell. Fingers crossed that the plumbing is not as expen­sive as it could be :p

  4. Diana G Itschner says:

    Love all your books, cannot wait for the new one!

  5. E_ says:

    Love the cover and the news of more Elantra books! *happy sigh*

    Good luck with the plumbing.

  6. Patrick says:

    As always the news that you have a new book coming gives me some­thing to look forward to

  7. Tracey says:

    Not used to the full-on, face forward eye contact on the cover. She looks sassy and up to trouble.

  8. Jen says:

    The new cover looks really cool. But I have to say it has always annoyed me that she doesn’t have her Night­shade mark in any of the covers. Please tell me we’ll see Night­shade in this one! I miss him.

  9. michelle says:

    @Jen: I’m sorry — in this book, there will still be no Night­shade =/. I have, and had, three sepa­rate possible Night­shade stories, but they’ve failed to cohere for me, possibly because they’re also High Court & Consort adjacent.

  10. Lauren W Isaacs says:

    As usual, I am on pins and needles for all of them to be finished so that I can get them imme­di­ately. Bless you for being so talented and loving to write — you are so valued and loved for that.

  11. Elissa Carroll says:

    @Jen @Michelle, it will be so fun when­ever we DO get to have more Night­shade. Hoping some of those arcs cohere for you Michelle! Jen does make a great point about the brand from Night­shade not being present!! Why hadn’t I ever noticed that?!? Michelle, any ideas/thoughts on that not being included? The new cover is really nice.

  12. Elizabeth says:

    Another Severn book would be greatly appreciated!

  13. Nevada says:

    Michelle is prob­ably the only one that ever wishes her books were shorter. I’m with Jen in hoping for more Night­shade. Night­shade, Avandar, Isladar.

  14. Joey says:

    @Nevada: I am all for shorter books and non-series books from The Author. And more (actu­ally short) short stories. But I am fairly certain she is aware of this. I’m also pretty sure she knows I will buy what­ever books she writes, so there’s that.

  15. Chris says:

    You write it and I will read it. :)

  16. Bryan says:

    Already pre-ordered the new book, and will continue to do so until your stop writing entirely. Soon I will intro­duce my son to your novels (he is 13) in the hopes he will love your world as much as I.

  17. Mary Allen says:

    I too will read anything you write but do miss Isladar and Night­shade. I just started the Sun Sword series over.

  18. br60103 says:

    Michelle: your web site is still apol­o­gising for the delayed appear­ance of Cast in Eter­nity. Can you do anything about this without delaying the next couple of books?

  19. michelle says:

    @br60103: I had two reac­tions to reading this. The first was to laugh out loud, and the second, to cringe. But you are, of course, correct. So yes, I can change that — I think at the time I made that post so that people might see it when they landed, and yes, it was… a while ago.

  20. marinamoon says:

    Dear Michelle,

    Thanks for the update. So excited for the new books. Really happy to hear all this good news. Sorry about the rough life. Hugs. Fighting! Sending u strength to face the fire at home.

  21. Shafi says:

    I can’t imagine the complexity of keeping all the details of all stories straight — in partic­ular when you are writing “the past” vs present. I really enjoyed Shards of Glass, although I must admit, I discov­ered I had devel­oped some uncon­scious world beliefs about the races in the Cast series (humans not being partic­u­larly powerful with magic) that were chal­lenged by your last 2 books. It’s funny how I concep­tu­al­ized the Dragons, Barrani, Wevaran, Thalani, and Ances­tors as having more innate magic with Kailyn being the excep­tion for humans. I can’t wait to see where the series is going. There are never enough new books, lol! I eagerly await more books! Yay!

  22. michelle says:

    @Shafi: Some­times I don’t do a great job keeping all the details straight =/. I’ve mentioned this before, but eye colors are a big, big weak­ness of mine. 

    Also: I think most humans don’t have magical talent; some do. But in general, the longer lived races have the time to develop what powers they do possess; it doesn’t matter if it takes two centuries. So it would make sense that the other races seem more inher­ently magical. Most of the humans are doing what we all do: living life and some­times strug­gling to stay afloat.

  23. Laura says:

    Hello! Will you ever go back and tell early stories about Kaylin, after Cast in Moon­light? Also, love the Snoopy watch!!! He’s my favorite character.

  24. michelle says:

    @Laura: there’s an entire half of Cast in Moon­light that I didn’t write because the “short story” was already 39,600 words, and I’d been asked for 30k words. But I admit I’m kind of balancing dead­lines while walking on tightropes as is, so I won’t say “never”, but… not soon =/

  25. Veronica Kgore says:

    Dear Michelle,
    I have to tell you I absolutely love your books. I’ve been reading the House War, Sun Sword, and Hunters Oath and Death for years. But I was wondering if you plan on doing any books or series about Evane. It would be so inter­esting to hear her story in chrono­log­ical order of her life rather than just in out of time in everyone else’s stories.

  26. Sally says:

    Dear Michelle,
    So happy to be currently reading Hunter’s Redoubt, having reread all the Sun Sword, Hunter’s and House War books to have all the char­ac­ters fresh in my memory. I will be looking forward to The Wild Road being published soon and more books in The Burning Crown to come.….

  27. michelle says:

    @Sally: Well, The Wild Road isn’t finished yet, so “soon” is rela­tive, but: thank you!

  28. michelle says:

    @Veronica: I think it would be hard to write her story chrono­log­i­cally. I did have a floating Evayne story about the day she became what she is, but haven’t written it. I’m not quite sure how I would approach it. One of the things that’s inter­esting about Evayne is she is a different person at different ages, when seen as she’s now seen. Which makes sense, but there’s a kernel of self on the inside of ourselves that makes that far less clear to ourselves. 

    It’s an inter­esting problem :)

  29. Ke'Chara says:

    :jumping up and down with reader joy:
    All of this is a win! [Well, not the plumbing issues.]
    The chance for another Severn story, has me all but quiv­ering. I really hoped we’d get to see him in action again. I would love to see how much he can vex his teachers, old and new, while solving a case.

  30. Mary Lynn Allen says:

    Michelle, In rereading the Sun Sword Series I came across a conver­sa­tion between Evayne and her father but he is not iden­ti­fied. Has he been iden­ti­fied? I know she has a sister.

    My memory is getting bad and I keep trying to figure out who else is an unknown God.

  31. Jessica says:

    Any chance we will ever know why night­shade was outcaste, is it a scan­dalous affair with the “lady”, now consort. 🤣 I’m also in the small group of people starved for any night­shade… it’s been 4 years! We better get those three books for the wait! Ive been waiting 15 years (since high school, i’m 30 now to know why he is outcaste and to know for sure if he is as evil as Kaylin perceives him to be, or secretly saving the world.

  32. michelle says:

    @Jessica: Night­shade is diffi­cult at this point in Kaylin’s story. I’ve been thinking about Night­shade — I have not forgotten him — but at this point, blending his past and the present seems possible in only one way to my current writer brain: the cohort. Which would make the books essen­tially Barrani books. That’s not a problem in and of itself, but there’s a certain tone that the Sagara books gener­ally have that … a Barrani only book might not have. If Mira was inter­ested in my going that route, I’d prob­ably start with Annarion, because the two are tightly tied (and one is still not speaking to the other much). It’s because of his brother that so much of Night­shade’s current situ­a­tion arose, directly or indirectly.

    But it would *require* non-Kaylin view­point, and that’s not a Cast novel. 

    The Severn novels gave me the chance — and by chance I mean: forced me if I wanted to write the books — to exper­i­ment with multiple view­points in the Cast universe. But I’ve been told by many readers that the Severn books don’t read so much like Sagara novels, but like West novels.

    I promise, I have been thinking about it =/

  33. Elissa Carroll says:

    @ Michelle, it is a fair point that they read a *bit* more like West novels than Sagara novels but they felt much more like a very healthy blend of the two. I loved them and felt they added wonderful diver­sity into the universe that it sincerely bene­fited from. I would absolutely be beyond thrilled to have a Barani only book if it allowed for us to get Night­shade back into the story­line. And even if it wasn’t for that point, it would simply be enjoyable.

  34. melanie allen says:

    Michelle, I agree Severn’s book did expand and add to the universe. Yet, I will say, what­ever you write, I will read. I am sorry you are having issues around the house.

  35. Chris Carlucci says:

    Having finished “Hunter’s Redoubt” (worth every penny spent), I’ve been combing through previous books and short stories pulling together infor­ma­tion about different char­ac­ters to see them better in my mind. Most recently I finished re-reading “Sigurne.”

    I can’t tell you how much I appre­ciate your short stories that expanded on indi­vidual char­ac­ters or groups. They have really added depth to the novels. As you draw the series to a close, I hope that you have the oppor­tu­nity to pick a few other char­ac­ters and tell us more about their backgrounds.

    Sigurne would not be who she is without Sari­as­trasse. My curiosity about Isladar is intense. I find myself yearning to know the story of the birth of the Hells and the fall of the Kialli.

    Thank you again for pursuing self-publishing. I really hope that it more than pays for itself.

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