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State of the Author, February 2025 edition

Posted in writing.

I have finished Cast in Blood, the provi­sional title for the next CAST novel. It is 15k words too long, and the last few chap­ters were there­fore written in a state of height­ened anxiety as I also began to consider what I could cut.

I’ve sent the book to the editor, regard­less, because I want the extra set of eyes and thoughts when it comes to losing the extra wordage.

This is the first of two Barrani books, so some of the things that don’t directly impact this book’s story are neces­sary for the follow-on. The threads are left untied because it’s not the only book. I didn’t intend this, but it’s not the first time it’s happened. It happened with Peril/Sorrow as well as Deception/Oblivion. None of this was inten­tional; being 15k words too long for the contracted maximum was certainly not inten­tional.

The construc­tion going on next door in the other half of our semi-detached house since December appears to have finally ended. Or at least the drilling, sawing, hammering parts have ended. When writing was being some­what elusive, it didn’t really help.

Because the book was 15k words longer than intended, I finished it later than intended. But there were other upheavals and changes in the back­ground. January: not good. February: less not good.

The next two weeks will be reviewing copy­edits for Wild Road, which I didn’t get done. Usually I can split work, but this time I couldn’t.

I really hope the rest of February settles down, but even if it doesn’t, I’m not over-length and late on a dead­line, which has to be an improvement.

19 Responses to State of the Author, February 2025 edition

  1. Nancy M Pyron says:

    As always, take care of your­self and know we will love the final product!!

  2. Krystina Stephenson says:

    If your publisher can leave the extra words in, then they should. We are always happy to read more! Hope life settles down for you soon. Thank you for all your stories. They are loved, as are you.

  3. Joyce says:

    I’m glad things a less not-good. I’m less glad that you can’t just leave in the extra words if they are needed because I’m happy to read all of them and 15k sounds like more than fat and fluff words. Take care of your­self. Know we are all in your corner.

  4. Ashley W says:

    Cut nothing we want it all! At least that’s my vote! Can’t wait and hope­fully this year goes up from here because I agree, January was.. not good. Glad February is less not good.

  5. JB says:

    I am so excited you have gotten this far. A lot of work for another master­piece and another one planned. Looking forward to reading them. Thank you so much for your imag­i­na­tion in this stories. Don’t forget to take care of your­self and sleep and eat.

  6. Lesa says:

    I’m looking forward to reading the book. 🙂 Just, keep writing. You are just doing okay! Love your books!

  7. Gail Halsted says:

    Thanks for perse­vering against a back­ground of constant noise. Well done on getting help with the revising. It takes a person of wisdom to acknowl­edge when the job has got too big for one person. Looking forward to reading this in due course.

  8. Aquilegia says:

    Thank you for the update. I too would love all the words you can possibly give us. But I know publishers worry about produc­tion costs and are out to spoil our fun. We appre­ciate you

  9. jennifermorris11 says:

    Tell them we don’t want you to cut words!

  10. Mary Lynn Allen says:

    I too would like to have the more words and would be willing to pay a bit more if that was an option. I hope February is better. I am re reading House Wars, finished all of Sun Sword to be ready for Wild Road. I ’ m sure it being quiet next door will help.

  11. Jazzlet says:

    I’m glad February is less not good so far, the quieter next door must help, but I hope it manages to get up into good before it ends.

  12. br60103 says:

    I just went onto a big chain book­store site to see if I could order it.
    I note that they have some of your books labelled “Cana­dian Author” but possibly only half of them.

  13. Diana Brock says:

    The two double books were fantastic. I am sure if that is where this heads, it will be great also.
    Will you ever write a book about Kaylin’s father, or is it one of those happens when it happens.

  14. Laura says:

    I’m happy to ready anything you write. To me, book length should fit the story, not the publish­er’s restric­tions. I’ve read a number of scifi books that were 8001000 pages and I enjoyed them, even the heavy hard­cover ones (with a pillow on my lap under the book). And these days I enjoy them even more on my e‑reader.
    Have you consid­ered noise cancelling head­phones? I can sympa­thize with noises outside of your control being very distracting.

  15. Melanie A Allen says:

    I am always looking forward to your books, the longer the better as I never want the story to end. I so under­stand loud neigh­bors, hope they quite down and stay that way. Please take care of yourself

  16. Crystal Smith says:

    I Hate when authors have to limit their wording, it will work out. Hope­fully your editor will be like take all the “the“ ‘s out and let the readers wonder lol. Any construc­tion can be frus­trating when your not use to noise all the time. Hope­fully March will be your month.

  17. Aquilegia says:

    A total non sequitur, but when I imagine the wevaren the image that I see is similar to the World of Warcraft neru­bians. I don’t know if that is what was intended, or if they are supposed to look more like Earth spiders

    Just today’s random thought

  18. Kel says:

    Looking forward to it! Re-listening to the whole story from book one after enjoying Severn’s prequels

  19. Devon says:

    At this point they need to let you have a bigger limit; I under­stand most of why publishers do what they do and why they think it’s neces­sary, but anyone reading Book 19 in a series doesn’t care if it’s longer than the other 18. Plus, at this point the world is so complex and we have so much essen­tial knowl­edge that readers need brief reminders of that I fear any cuts of ‘unneeded parts’ will by neces­sity actu­ally be parts we need

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